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人教版高中英语教材错误指正(M1,2)

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人教版高中英语教材错误指正
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在Module 1, Unit 5 Reading: Elias’ Story 中第三段第一句话:

The day when Nelson Mandela helped me was one of my happiest.

This sentence doesn’t read natural. 这句话写得不太严谨,应改为以下句子可能更好:

It was one of my happiest days when Nelson Mandela helped me.

在同一篇课文中第10行至11行,我们看到这样一个句子:

I had to leave because my family could not continue to pay the school fees and the bus fare.

这个句子中fare 最好用fares, 因为前面的fee 已经用了复数,用and 时应尽量保持一致,英语谓agreement, 但国外著名语法家Quirk则把它定义为concord。而且fare 可作可数名词,试举牛津词典中的几个例子:

air/bus/taxi fares   train/rail fares


必修2(Module 2)Unit 1 Reading: In Search Of The Amber Room 第5行:

which took the country’s best artists about ten years to make.

此句中的the country’s best artists是口语非正规的表达(colloquial English), 最好改为:

which took the best artists in/of the country about ten years to make.

必修2 (Module 2) Unit 5 Reading: Music 第32行:

The band broke up about 1970, but happily they reunited in the mid-1980s.

这个句子少了一个介词,是英语口语表达法,应改为:

The band broke up in about 1970, but happily they reunited in the mid-1980s.

本单元第35页练习1 也出现了同样的错误:

However, the band broke up about 1970,  应改为:

However, the band broke up in about 1970,

必修2 (Module 2) Unit 2 Listening, page 15, The Race 中第三段第一句话:

When she finally caught up with Hippomenes the second time, he threw the third and last golden apple.

在此句中,the second time 应改为a second time, 意为“再一次”而不是“第二次”。

必修2(Module 2)Unit 3 Using Language (p.23): Andy --- The Android 课文中第二段倒数第三行有这样一句话:

I would really like to play against a human team. 我真的特别喜欢和人类球队比赛。

这句话最好译为:我真的特别希望和真人球队一决高下。

本段最后还有这么一句话:… using my intelligence is what I’m all about. 运用智能就是我的一切。

此句最好翻译为:运用智能就是我的意义所在。

必修2(Module 2) p.91 Unit 3  生词和习惯用语中所列的短语:

human race 尽管在英文报刊的标题中和词汇表中可以省略冠词,但学生往往注意不到这一特点,在写作时遗漏了这个冠词the, 所以前面最好加 the: 即 the human race。

必修2(Module 2) p.27 Unit 4  Comprehending: Exercise 3 文中有这么一句话:
Although this is not allowed, the coffee is excellent quality and has sold very well.

此句在excellent quality 前最好加一个介词 of , 构成一个习惯表达法:be + of + n. = be + adj.

Although this is not allowed, the coffee is of excellent quality and has sold very well.

必修2 (Module 2)  p.63 Workbook  Unit 4 Wildlife Protection  Exercise 2, 倒数第三行,有这么一个句子:

There are enough of them to make their place in the world secure.

这个句子因为在课本中隔了一行学生很容易产生解读错误,而且宾语their place后加了介词短语in the world, 所以这个句子结构比较松散,最好将secure 改为动词:

There are enough of them to secure their place in the world..

当然这个句子也可以把secure 提前放在make 的后面,这样读上去比较紧凑一点,但没有上面的句子好:

There are enough of them to make secure their place in the world..

必修2 (Module 2) Unit 5  p.36  Learning about Language  Exercise 3, 第二行:

The regulars there were very kind to us.

这个句子中的regular 作名词,意为 “常客,老主顾”, 比较口语化,最好改为:

The regular customers were very kind to us.

或者在词汇表中将该词作为名词列出来。


         

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