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人教版高中英语教材错误指正(M3)

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人教版高中英语教材错误勘误(M3)
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必修3 Unit 1 Reading: Festivals And Celebrations  p.1 第一段第三行:

Most ancient festivals would celebrate the end of cold weather, planting in spring and harvest in autumn.

在这句话中,我们看到有一个短语:planting in spring and harvest in autumn, 前面是动名词planting 后面是名词短语,这样的结构显得有一点不一致,不够平衡,也不文雅,最好改为:

Most ancient festivals would celebrate the end of cold weather, planting in spring and harvesting in autumn.

必修3 Unit 1 Reading: Festivals And Celebrations  p.2 第二段第一行:

Some festivals are held to honour the dead or to satisfy the ancestors, …

此句中不定式短语 to satisfy the ancestors 被译成: 使他们得到满足,最好翻译为:使他们得到慰藉。或者译为:有些节日是为了纪念死者或者告慰祖先。

此课文第二十六行:

…, the leader who helped gain India’s independence from Britain.

这个句子读起来不通顺,比较拗口,最好改为:

…, the leader who helped Indians gain their independence from Britain.

或者改为:…, the leader who helped his people gain their independence from Britain.

此课文第三十行有这么一个句子:

In European countries, people will usually decorate churches and town halls with flowers and fruit, …

此句中fruit 用了单数,当fruit 作一种水果解时为不可数名词,但在此句中应解读为各种各样的水果,所以最好改为复数:

In European countries, people will usually decorate churches and town halls with flowers and fruits, …

此课文第三十六行有这么一个句子:

The most energetic and important festivals are the ones that look forward to the end of winter and to the coming of spring.

此句中有两个名词短语作介词to 的宾语: to the end of winter and to the coming of spring. 如果我们用approach 替代coming 可能读上去更文雅一点,顺便说一下,approach 是高考词汇。

The most energetic and important festivals are the ones that look forward to the end of winter and to the approach of spring.

此课文中第四十行有这么一个句子:
 
The country, covered with cherry tree flowers, looks as though it is covered with pink snow.

此句中有一个as if 引导的状语从句没有使用虚拟语气,这是非正规英语(informal English),最好改为虚拟语气:

The country, covered with cherry tree flowers, looks as though it were/was covered with pink snow.

必修3 Unit 2 Reading: Come And Eat Here p.10 第4 行, 有这么一个句子:

By now his restaurant ought to be full of people.

此句中的people 最好改为 customers, 因为第17行又出现了 people 这个单词,应避免重复, 而且customer 也是高考词汇:

By now his restaurant ought to be full of customers.

本课文第31行有这么一个句子:

Even though her customers might get thin after eating Yong Hui’s food, …

此句中的动词get 太口语化,最好改为:

Even though her customers might become thin after eating Yong Hui’s food, …

再把下面的一句They would become tired very quickly 改为:

They would feel/be tired very soon/often.

此句也可改写为:

They would feel tired soon after.

本单元第二篇阅读文章 Come And Eat Here 2,  p.14, 第6行,有这么一个句子:

…, I know that you only came to spy on me and my menu,” she shouted.

此句中的 only 其实是修饰动词短语 to spy on me, 所以最好改为:

…, I know that you came only to spy on me and my menu,” she shouted.

必修3 Unit 3 Learning about Language  p.20  Ex.2 第二组A 句:

Please keep a complete account of the money we have spent.

此句中account 定义为:an arrangement what the bank keeps your money,这是不对的,应改为:a record of money paid out

本组B句:

I opened an account at the bank downstairs.

此句中account 定义为: what you own, 这是不对的,应改为:an arrangement that somebody has with a bank

必修3 Unit 4 Using Language: A Visit To The Moon  p.30 第二段第三行:

… because we were trying to escape the pull of the earth’s gravity. 这句话最好改为:

… because we were trying to escape the gravitational pull of the earth. 或

… because we were trying to escape the attraction of the earth.

在本课文后还有一个句子,p. 31, 第一段第二行:

, but it will not be as strong a pull as the earth’s. 最好改为:

, but it will not be as strong a pull as that of the earth.


         

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