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美国总统演讲错误勘正

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美国总统演讲错误勘正

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美国总统奥巴马在校园枪击案发生所在地Newtown发表了著名演讲:We Can Do Better. 其中有一句话是这么说的:

And in between, there have been an endless series of deadly shootings across the country, almost daily reports of victims, many of them children, in small towns and in big cities all across America, victims whose -- much of the time their only fault was being at the wrong place at the wrong time.

这句话使用了一个定语从句:whose their only fault was being at the wrong place at the wrong time. 从中我们可以看出句中their是多余的,故应省略,改为:

..., victims whose -- much of the time -- only fault was being at the wrong place at the wrong time.

其中much of the time是插入语,应与定语从句隔开为好。

 


         

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